Reading Task T1W8

Task Description:
For this task we had to complete and answer the questions and tasks in the presentation above. This is the finished project. Hope you enjoy! Feel free to leave a positive blog comment.

East German Childhood Task 2

Story Name: East German Childhood

Original storyteller: Uli Hartung

Story Writer: Lucy Corry

Reviewer: Jedida

                              East German Childhood Review:

This story start off by saying something about the Berlin wall. About how it was made on august 12 1961, and by then Uli Hartung was sixteen years old. The next paragraph (the original start,) starts of talking about Uli's family. Her older sister, her mum, and her dad. In this paragraph, we are also informed of her parents careers. Her Mum was a veterinarian researcher, and her Dad was a doctor. I think that this is a good way to start paragraph because she is informing things that may be useful for different parts of the story.

Firstly, in the second paragraph, it shows/talks about German history throughout the 1900's. This paragraph includes a couple of sentences about the second world war (which is of course very useful,) and also facts about how Germany was once split into 4 parts.  I think that it's also great to include things about Uli's country, and not just the things that happened while she was growing up. I also think that showing the times.years during these events are very necessary as well.

Next, most of these paragraphs regard most of her memories from her childhood. I think that this is also very necessary because when you write something, you kind of have to relate it to the title, and I think that Lucy Corry did a great job of this. I also like how she put in the before, during, and after all in this one story. Also explaining the food situation, and her feelings.

Overall, I think that Lucy Corry did an amazing job writing this story, and Uli Hartung did an amazing job living it. I definitely learnt a lot of new things by reading this story, and it's a true story, those ones are even better! I give this reading a five out of five.  

East German Childhood task 1

Task Description:
For this task we had to complete the first task of five for a story about a girl named Uli Hartung, who grew up in East Germany.

Taha Whanau Home Learning

Task Description:
For this task we had to complete the task from our home learning home work sheets. This is what I decided to post on my blog. It is about Te Taha Whanau, and My Whanau.

My Visual Mihi

Task Description:
For this task we had to create a Visual Mihi, not really showing things that we like, but things that represents us. For example, Music represents me because I love music, playing music, and also listening to it, it's a part of me. Just like how my Family is apart of me as well, because I am apart of my Family. That also stands for my Cultures, and where I come from. Hope you Enjoy!